Comment on Seven Weeks to Armageddon

  1. Ghost19 on Chapter 4 Fri 30 May 2025 02:02PM UTC

    And so they’ve decided to invade Earth and wage war against Humanity before the Angelic Army is deployed. Perhaps conflict was inevitable given how we view Hell and Demonkind, but it’s still an unwise move on Satan’s part; Earth isn’t just going to sit back and watch as they’re plundered and slaughtered by infernal invaders. They will fight back. Hell is going to lose plenty of their forces taking the planet assuming they don’t get bogged down in their war with the Humans.

    Speaking of which, are you planning on introducing you’re still-living OC’s in the next chapter?

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    1. Daniel Goldhorn (DanielGoldhorn) on Chapter 4 Fri 30 May 2025 05:39PM UTC

      Oh one of my OCs has already shown up, and there'll be more coming. Unless you're speaking of some other OCs?

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      1. Ghost19 on Chapter 4 Fri 30 May 2025 07:25PM UTC

        Yes, others besides the governor.

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        1. Daniel Goldhorn (DanielGoldhorn) on Chapter 4 Fri 30 May 2025 10:34PM UTC

          There'll be some others showing up later on, yes! In a way Flauros is semi a semi-original character I suppose, and there'll be some other humans that'll be important later in the story.

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          1. Ghost19 on Chapter 4 Sat 31 May 2025 12:53AM UTC

            Soldiers?

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      3. Trex (Guest) on Chapter 4 Tue 15 Jul 2025 03:17AM UTC

        This was a brilliant chapter, you got the characters mannerisms down to a T, Satan especially with how angry and arrogant he is he clearly did not think this invasion plan through. The might of the US military and NATO aside. christians will still be up there after the rapture and many will likely convert on mass and what is the things I think they’ll be using a fight demonic legions will be holy water. Which means demons will be facing squirt guns firetrucks and waterbombers full of holy water. Admit firefighters armed with holy water sounds really cool and I can see it being extremely effective against legions. But it won’t be a total black-and-white fight and demons I imagine the hell born for the incubus the succubi hellhounds won’t just be going up there for murder and mayhem, “OK he’s gonna be that too but that’s remember Joya water” But given the new found freedom I think there’s gonna be lots of good things to happen too, this could be a good intriguing study on society and given the choice many demons or Hill born I think would choose the party with humans make relationships with them for sexual and romantic maybe find a way to explore the new freedom in ways they never cut before because their societies held them back. “I think this could be a very intriguing idea I hope you do because I don’t just don’t want to see murder and mayhem I want to see legit friendly maybe even friendly party in human interaction with Demons.” But given the new found freedom I think there’s gonna be lots of good things to happen too, this could be a good intriguing study on society and given the choice many demons or Hill born I think would choose the party with humans make relationships with them for sexual and romantic maybe find a way to explore the new freedom in ways they never cut before because their societies held them back. “I think this could be a very intriguing idea I hope you do because I don’t just don’t want to see murder and mayhem I want to see legit friendly maybe even friendly party in human interaction with Demons.“ perhaps Octavia can meet & befriend a human, I think that would be really interesting especially since that was opportunity that was missed in the “seeing stars “episode. I also on the last note find it very intriguing and cool that Lucifer is taking charge and trying to negotiate with his brothers and sisters on how to handle this and also how to possibly survive. PS you don’t have to do any of my ideas I just listed by hope you do because I think they’re very intriguing and I think you can do it justice. And also would be a good example I believe the show that life isn’t entirely black-and-white and it would be surprising for having to see how born demons and humans getting along too ann extent.

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        1. Daniel Goldhorn (DanielGoldhorn) on Chapter 4 Wed 16 Jul 2025 03:29AM UTC

          Hey, thanks so much for finding my story and commenting on it! <3 Glad to have you along for the ride. I do see your idea about the holy water, might just include that in the next chapter actually... I hope you enjoy it!

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          1. Trex (Guest) on Chapter 4 Wed 30 Jul 2025 02:40PM UTC

            Wow thanks for not only responding, but taking what I said into consideration. I do enjoy the story and I only comment on the ones that I really enjoy and I didn’t see the potential I wanted to give up my ideas. Because me think about Hoyt water is like lava to anything demonic and a firetruck alone. Would really do damage to demon legions. Hill just look up what the US military has an R disposal and you’ll see how bad the demons got it, B1 Lancers, f15s, Apache helicopters A-10 warthog‘s, m2 Bradley’s and Abrams tanks, not to mention the rest of NATO. This is gonna be intense can’t tenants

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