Is it too late to return him? 🤣 Why would you want to? He’s the perfect dork! 😍
Swaps, I may have cursed a few times with all your teasing, but boy, the pain was so worth it. Your characterisation from beginning to end, for each and every character that shows up, even if just to give Shepard a hard time on the stand or muse about old friends they miss with Kaidan, is an absolute delight. I’m in awe, really. This is such a wonderful story.
Especially love how Kaidan and Sam’s closeness and dorkiness with each other flows all the way through, even into the intimate parts. It doesn’t all run smoothly but that makes it so realistic and perfect.
I honestly have enjoyed every minute reading this, thank you so much for writing and sharing it. Can’t wait for more. 💕💕
They are SUCH DORKS, right??? That's one of my favorite things about them. The other Shepard I've put a lot of development into is a lot more intense than Sam, so having this character who still has that lighter, playful side to work with gave me a lot of great opportunities.
This story was such a joy to write, and an even bigger joy to share because of reactions like yours. Thank you SO MUCH for being so supportive and enthusiastic.
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WillowDeville on Chapter 13 Fri 14 Aug 2020 07:55PM UTC
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