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The Concealed and the Revealed

Chapter 2: Back to the drawing board

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Ok, so, I had a pretty good idea of where I wanted to take this story when I started.

But after being given the suggestion of using Cain, new ideas started to pop up and now my direction is more like a series of loop-de-loops.

First, I just want to thank those who gave me kudos on the intro! I have never written before and seeing those were just amazing!

Second, I wanted to say that I will leave the intro up while I’m reworking my idea, because I think I’ll stick with the tragic beginning for my OC, if a little tweaked later, but I need to sort out my ideas and nail down a plot I can stick to before I continue.

This will be continued! I promise! I want to see my first story through to the end if I can.

Until then, I’m back to the drawing board.

Notes:

* What is interesting about the number 21 in the bible is that it is a number associated with sin and corruption, just like 13. It is also the number of days it takes for a chicken egg to hatch, which I found interesting.

Anyway, let me know how it is so far and don’t hold back on any criticism, I’ll take any help I can get.

Intro: 1,439 Words!