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  1. Uh... Chris. Yeah. Let's go with that. (Guest) Wed 25 Mar 2020 03:30PM UTC

    Urm... can't exactly put what I feel into words, but I can assure you that none of them are negative.

    This was definitely a good read, though it could have been better with better dialogue placement and paragraph sizing.

    There are a few times where the dialogue essentially "sinks" into the rest of the text, and thick paragraphs may come off as--for the lack of a better description--"too much at once".

    You don't gotta do this, but it's just a bit of food-for-thought. Again, this really was a great read. Just seeing if I can help make it even better, is all. Hope you have a nice day! :)

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