I've read this story five times now. And it never loses its charm. While the ending isn't "perfect", per say, it is very real, and I have no doubt that Frisk's family will be there to help them. After all, Frisk doesn't scream like that, and it would be strange for the ambassador of monsters to be screaming at a diplomat.
As someone who has endured some of the trauma (I assure you, not the time travel bit, that would be very very intense), you captured the struggle and affects perfectly, so kudos (heh) to you.
I appreciate this story so much. Your writing was simply fantastic and it just made me so happy (not the content, just the flow and word choice). Your characterization is spot on, and overall, just an incredible piece.
And incredibly fucked. Can't forget that.
Anyways, love this so much, and thank you for inspiring me to write more stuffs. You are really talented. Like insanely talented. So way to go.
Ah jeeze, I'm sorry you had to go through trauma in your past. I hope you're doing okay now, or are at least working towards being okay again.
Also, thank you very much for the praise! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. This is the longest thing I've probably ever written, so I'm glad its consistent throughout.
And hell yeah! I'm glad I could help inspire you to write! Good luck!
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