Bro wtf this is not okay... i didn't expect to like it so freaking much. It was really by pure coincidence that I even got here, like previously i was reading how, or when, or from where, and i had finished the most recent chapter, scrolled down and stuff, don't remember if i read the comments but i accidentally clicked on your account name at the who left kudos! part. i wasn't really planning to, but i was like, what the hell, why not. so i looked through your stories and remember seeing some of them having appeared in the yoonseok tab but i couldn't churn out more tabs, my phone is like really done with me and stuff, memory space not available, chrome crashes sometimes, and i use incognito as a 'fresh start' when i feel like the regular tabs have just... way too many tabs, SO i was just scrolling through and stuff, thinking everything was cute and stuff even though i couldn't open the link in a new tab, and have forgotten, way too many times, that the Mark for Later button exists. But then a few days ago that happened and i was on your profile and all, and since this time i was on my laptop (i have like more than 50 tabs open and a ton on incognito still..this is getting nowhere sorry if you'll have to read this rant) i was like, oh that grim reaper one sounds fun, and ugh yes i did stalk your bookmarks (i don't mean to be creepy) and i just read like one or two of them before this one, but!!! then i got to Your story.
i'm kind of lost for words; the beginning was. Wicked. i was so happy reading their first encounter! it was funny and yoongi is really just That grumpy man, but real soft on the inside and so cool already that i knew i was probably going to enjoy it. I really did!!! Everything was so cute and soft and cute and soft, until... the End. but the second End was sweeter :') still kinda bittersweet, but the overall story satisfied me real well. Taegi was so cute tooooooooo T-T everything was just so cute, yoongi appearing with tae's blue snapback? adorable mcmarshmallow. tae saying that he would probably just do aegyo and that yoongi's wording was Way better? squishy honey bear. yoongi comforting tae? iconic moment for these two softies. all the relationships in this were just so cute, how can anyone not think that clumsy SILVER HAIRED (silver and blue and black were my favorites... :'( ) joon in a teal coat (this gets me so soft, for real), getting flustered over spilling some coffee- an accident i assume could have been fixed with the snap of two of his fingers- and kim seokjin, in his ridiculously adorable pink coat and marvelous pink hair, basically all in his trademark pink color (idk about the hats though), getting flustered at namjoon's clumsiness as well, are cute? and yoongi's these are my idiot bosses, oh gosh. there were just so many (too many to list, i should really be getting some sleep about now, or a few hours ago), jikook are both tae's goblin brides.. I haven't even watched goblin yet, even though I SAID to myself (and everyone around me) that i would like 2-3 breaks ago, before this summer break. Well like now i want to. and i already know something angsty is up, nothing to do with the few spoilers my friends shouted right next to my ears. goblin!tae and grim reaper! yoongi... wow you've done your Deed, that so fucking great. maybe i'll keep thinking of that concept/au for a while.
so i told you what i liked in your writing, but i haven't told you what i liked about your writing yet. don't worry, it's nearing the end. i always think of this whenever i read good stories, this really wasn't just a shitty fanfiction like you said. even with the cute and funny moments, and overall playful aura of this fic, you had such simple but nice descriptions of feelings, of how things tasted, sensed, etc. i think you use such nice metaphors and all that good stuff that i think you would write a badass poem, or something like that. i wish i could write at least half or a third as good as you do. stories like yours made me really enjoy reading; i genuinely like reading because the way certain people write, and you're one of those people. ahhh i really liked it.
As I sit here, in front of my computer, at around 3:40 AM (it's 4:24 AM now), my butt numb,
-trying to fit everything into that one box (i failed, you can probably see that), i have decided to go through all your fics- when i have the time and space to open even more new tabs lol. sorry for the long ass comment, but i just really like it. :) here's another emoji :D (feelin' accomplished)
thank you for writing such a cute story! <3
p.s.: i should have said that it was going to be really long in the beginning.
Ok I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to reply to this but I wanted to make sure my reply was worthy of this comment. Ok first things first the fact that you took the time to write this long ass comment nearly made me cry (well I read it at 2am so maybe I cried just a little I'm emotional when I'm tired ok ;;) I always feel like no one really cares about my writing and that it's bad and seeing stuff like this?? Makes me feel so happy?? So incredibly happy?? Also you said specifically what you like about my writing and it just....... ajsjdkflflg it makes me so happy I'm getting really emotional writing this. I haven't really posted a lot on ao3 bc depression/anxiety is kicking my ass and also bc I don't feel like anyone likes my writing but you've really inspired me to keep on writing. Thank you so much for leaving this comment it means more to me than you could possibly imagine
Wow sorry I'm so late but a lot of times I don't log in so i don't check my inbox frequently but omg. I loved reading your reply, I feel so warm inside because my long ass comment made you happy. Seriously, I love this story (even though i was a little heartbroken at the end (might've teared up a little but we don't talk about that)) so much. The concept itself is already fking cute, but the way you wrote it made me have so much of those Feels man. I rarely ever leave comments and when I do I want to be very honest about how I felt. But it's very hard for me to explain them in words and I get super frustrated afterwards. I've written like less than ten comments total and the one i wrote you is one of the longest ones. And no, it was not because it was way past my bedtime that I felt like spilling my mind. Relaying all my thoughts into those comment boxes were so hard, i literally recorded when i started and when i stopped writing my comment at the end of the first one i wrote. (did i really take more than 44 minutes..) i had to go back and forth and keep editing my comments just so that they could be just the least bit coherent lol. even right now, when i reread what i wrote, i feel like i've missed some points i wanted to talk about, but i don't want to change it because i write comments when the story's fresh in my mind the first time i take a read. (it's like 10:45-55 pm now so i'm not THAT sleep-deprived. this comment should make more sense)
i'm being so honest when i say i wish i could write at least a fraction as well as you can, so i want you to know that your writing's not shitty. :) mine is soo bad that i'm scared of writing actual stories, because if i do i know i'm going to cringe a lot at what i write that isn't an essay, and it's ACTUALLY shitty. you can't even imagine. (trust me on that) i just. really like how you write.
it's hard, but i do hope you feel better about your writing, even though you have to deal what what you have. i'm really glad i inspired you to keep going on writing, that's so fking good to hear and i had to read that at least twice. and you're welcome, your writing's so fking lovely!! :D
asdfdsf u came back!!! ur literally my favourite commenter u always light up my day. sometimes when I'm feeling shit and like i can't write i honestly reread ur comments and always feel better <3 I'm so happy u took the time and effort to write comments it rlly means so much not only to me but to all fic writers we're all so desperate for comments lol. i rlly hope that u have the confidence to write in the future i bet its not as bad as u think!! just start writing and even if its cringe and horrible just carry on!! the only way to get good is to start!! every writer starts of writing complete shit and its great and totally hilarious when u go back and read it in a few years or even months you'll def be able to see improvement!! thanks so so so fuckin much for commenting again and sorry it took so long for me to reply I've been v busy with school/writer's block but i have a big project that i've been working on that i should b posting soon!! hopefully you'll enjoy it too!! i think it'll b a little less sad tho hopefully! <333333
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